E-portfolio

  In Language Arts, the class projects mainly consisted of essays.  So what I am presenting for my best work is an essay that I wrote earlier in the year.  This essay was revised by me today, and altered to make me feel that is is acceptable to show you.  The link is here if you want to read it.

  The essay is about somebody or something that inspires me, or is important to me.  I chose to write about my mother, because she has toughed through things that I can't even begin to describe.  The things that I mainly changed were some spelling errors, punctuation errors, annoying formatting issues.  I also made my conclusion and introduction a bit more informational, and not just repetitive sentences.